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In the Mist of Morning Feedback Thread
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- Gerry's 3 AM GAL
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GALS/PALS Name: The Stranger's Blond Bombshell,Champion SkimmerGAL
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TheBlonde hearding cats.... I need more litter
TheBlonde hearding cats.... I need more litter
Posted 14 October 2010 - 07:01 AM
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- Archie's Ocean GAL
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Posted 29 March 2011 - 10:07 PM
Hi LittleBlueSkye ,
I know it's been a while since you posted the beginning your story, here, but I couldn't help stopping to say. well done! Your opening scene as a moive insert grabbed and held my attention, and
I moved right on into the interplay between both Malcolm's thoughts and his interactions. You've peaked my interest!
I hope you have more fiction; I will have to check what else you've posted on site. In the meantime, perhaps you will consider writing more of this story. I'd like to find out more about Malcolm.
Good Luck your writing efforts.
sm
I know it's been a while since you posted the beginning your story, here, but I couldn't help stopping to say. well done! Your opening scene as a moive insert grabbed and held my attention, and
I moved right on into the interplay between both Malcolm's thoughts and his interactions. You've peaked my interest! I hope you have more fiction; I will have to check what else you've posted on site. In the meantime, perhaps you will consider writing more of this story. I'd like to find out more about Malcolm.
Good Luck your writing efforts.
sm
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- Gerry's 3 AM GAL
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- Group: Mods
- Member No.: 1605
- Posts: 9,846
- Joined: 26-May 06
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- Location:BFE, TX
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GALS/PALS Name: The Stranger's Blond Bombshell,Champion SkimmerGAL
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TheBlonde hearding cats.... I need more litter
TheBlonde hearding cats.... I need more litter
Posted 04 May 2011 - 01:45 PM
Thank you sm for commenting. The creative writing on GALS has been dormant for a while and I know the comments and positive feedback are encouraging.
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