Phantom's Muse Posted November 12, 2005 Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 Burrowed safe in his arms nothing can harm me there nothing will get through nothing could get through yet a fleeting death wish a dire dream and -- his arms slip away slowly then quickly I'd been so close to heaven yet now I'm drowning in hell yearning for his hand to entwine through mine knowing too well it never will Wishing to deny knowing my feelings for him will never die pining away for something more knowing that only less will come ashore nevermore, nevermore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Priscilla-Loves-Erik Posted November 12, 2005 Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 Hey! OMG...it's such a sad poem!!! But I absolutely loved it!! Don't be depressed.... But keep writing, it's the best medicine...to get it out!!! Thanks you so much for sharing Cheers Priscilla Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
becozy Posted November 12, 2005 Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 Hey, Phantom's Muse, What lovely, sad, emotion filled words... beautiful writing. I hope it's more writer's angst than real depression. We're here for you...thank's for sharing! Barbara Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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