Melodie Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Something I wrote to sort a few things out in my head. It's not a Gerry poem. But I was thinking about Shakespeare, etc and felt the need to write. Note: Please know that the first line is not meaning to be offensive, or worrying. It's just a metaphor which is explained further in the poem. Anguish The bloody knife glistens in the morning dew The mind awakens to a world anew The soul has been cut and ripped from its harbour Against the silent screams or the heart in arbour No more shall the crystal tears cascade In the reverie of the pained facade Only life in its fleeting gaze Shall kiss the memories of the effortless days Farewells are common in the land of dust The knowledge, the strength, the singly trust This sanity shatters against the barren crust No more, no more shall this weapon bring! Against the deafening roar the angel sings In life, in death the spirit weeps In silent smiles it lets the darkness creep Serenity shows it does not remain As the tears subside and leave their train I ponder in which is the path to take And heed this anguish in my wake Confessions of a life left dull It’s its empty, loveless, lonely hull There is not knife upon my breast No blood that’s spilt, no marks upon this chest A vacant echo, but resound the name Of the purity, the poverty, a life in vain In which a cast upon my heart The anguish builds the aching starts The life drawn image of smiles and dance A one last hope, a lucky chance Of that I see my path less clear Than the anguish left, still rotting here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbandonThought Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 My beautiful Melodie. Deep, and dark, and full of emotion. I hope it helped you get some of your emotions out, even a little bit. Steph Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melodie Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Thank you, Steph. I did help somewhat I think. Though it turned out a lot different than I expected. I started with on line that wasn't even in the beginning, and I just couldn't stop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phoenixgirl Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Wow - what a beautiful and deep poem. Thanks for sharing it with us, Melodie. Lisa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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