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TheBlonde

In the Mist of Morning

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Hi LittleBlueSkye ,

I know it's been a while since you posted the beginning your story, here, but I couldn't help stopping to say. well done! Your opening scene as a moive insert grabbed and held my attention, and Posted Image I moved right on into the interplay between both Malcolm's thoughts and his interactions. You've peaked my interest!

I hope you have more fiction; I will have to check what else you've posted on site. In the meantime, perhaps you will consider writing more of this story. I'd like to find out more about Malcolm.

Good Luck your writing efforts.

sm

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Thank you sm for commenting. The creative writing on GALS has been dormant for a while and I know the comments and positive feedback are encouraging.

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