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here is my story.

I was doing a remake video of the song "These Dreams." Little did I know that someone below where I was working was listening to the music. After the video was done, I went into my dressing room and I noticed there was a rose with a black ribbon on my make-up stand. I had asked all the crewmembers that I knew if they knew who had given me the rose. They said they did not know. So I gave up asking everyone and I went back to my dressing room. Next thing I knew I heard a voice coming from behind my the mirror that was standing next to the wall. I started to sing one of the parts from the song saying "In a wood full of princes, the freedom is a kiss" and the response I got was "But the prince hides his face... from dreams in the mist." Then the voice told me to walk towards the mirror.

After that the mirror started to open and I saw a hand with a black leather glove reach out from behind the mirror. I wanted to scream but something told me not to. So I took the voice's hand and when I entered the mirror, all I could see was a man in a mask. I asked him " Who are you? Why are you not with the other crewmembers?" He told me his name was Erik and that he did not belong out there. I asked why and he said that he is considered to be a misfit and does not like to be around others. As we were walking down he told me that I had a lovely voice and I was like thank you.

He asked me if I would like lessons and I said that I would if it does not cost anything. He said " It does not cost anything." So I told him "Ok."

After the lesson: Wish I could write all that he taught me but I will just give you a brief discription. He taught me how to not keep my voice from going off key.

And how make a vibrato. So we arranged to meet tomorrow night. I told him that I was tired from singing so much and he said " I have an extra spare bedroom. You could stay in there." I told him "Ok. Just let me return up there and get my pajamas and my stuffed animals." He let me go back up to my dressing room and get my stuff. When I returned, I saw all of his pictures of me and the sets. I was like "Wow!!!! Did you make these things yourself?""Most of it. The other things I bought or was given to me." He showed me to his spare bedroom and I gave him a goodnight kiss and he gave one back. This will be a night I will not forget.

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Great job Paige! I like your stories. Do you write much outside of the board? I know when I was your age, they had a think in Iowa called Young Writer's Conference. I went every year. It was tons of fun!

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sometimes i do. mostly in my english class. the last project that i had to do a lot of writing was when i had to do research on psychic abilities for my english class. i got a good grade on it and my teacher said that i turned out to be a good writer. ::D:

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"In a wood full of princes, the freedom is a kiss" and the response I got was "But the prince hides his face... from dreams in the mist." Then the voice told me to walk towards the mirror.

That's beautiful. It it yours or is it from somewhere?

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hey gals, I'm having a great time reading your stories, keep up the good work!!! :clap::clap::clap::kisswink:

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"In a wood full of princes, the freedom is a kiss" and the response I got was "But the prince hides his face... from dreams in the mist." Then the voice told me to walk towards the mirror.

That's beautiful. It it yours or is it from somewhere?

actually i got it from the Heart song "These Dreams" because that part reminds me of Erik saying that he is a Prince but he hides away from the rest of the world because of his face.

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Omg i thought of another part to my story.

The next morning I wake up in my nightgown and I noticed a plate with toast, eggs, and a glass of apple juice. Next to the plate I saw a beautiful parchment letter and here is what it said:

Dear sweet angel Paige,

I apologize for my departure but I must take care of some unfinished business. I shall return this evening to plan your next music video. Look behind the closet door and you will find a present and another note.

Love,

Erik

P.S. I hope you enjoy the breakfast I made you.

So I did what Erik told me to do and I saw a beautiful dress all gold and very sparkly. I picked up the other note and it said:

I hope you enjoy this dress. This will be your costume for the next music video.

I guess Erik somehow knew that my next choice of music video was going to be a remake of Selena's song "Dreaming of you." I try on my dress and it is a perfect fit. I practice my song using the tactics Erik taught me and it worked.

Here are the lyrics to the song if you do not know it.

Late at night when all the world is sleeping

I stay up and think of you

And I wish on a star that somewhere you are thinking of me too

Cause I'm dreaming of you tonight

Til tomorrow I'll be holding you tight

And there's nowhere round the world I'd rather be

Then here in my room dreaming about you and me

Wonder if you ever see me and I wonder if you know I'm there

If you looked in my eyes would you see what's inside

Would you even care?

I just wanna hold you close but so far all I have are dreams of you

So I wait for the day with the courage to say how much I love you

Yes I do

(chorus)

Corazon (heart)

I can't stop dreaming of you

I can't stop dreaming

I can't stop dreaming of you

Late at night when all the world is sleeping

I stay up and I think of you

I still can't believe that you came up to me and said "I love you"

I love you, too

Now I'm dreaming with you tonight

Til tomorrow and for all of my life

And there's nowhere round the world I'd rather be

Then here and my room dreaming with you endlessly

Erik returns and hears me practicing. His lasso in his hands. I guess he was mad at someone. Anyways I run up to him and give him a long 10 minute kiss. Ok, maybe not that long. But it was a kiss. "I guess you liked the dress." "Like it? I love it."

I will have to write more later. I have to go.

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Woohoo! Nice job Paige! I love that song, BTW... It makes me cry.

Mags, why don't you try a story too?

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Yeah mags why don't you. It is fun. Here is the last part of my story.

"Well good." Erik said. "We must return so that you can work, but you must promise that you will not tell anyone about us or me." I bow my head low and say "I promise." We gave eachother another kiss and he escorted me back to my dressing room. "I shall be hearing from down below." And then he closes the mirror door. " You are needed in 10 minutes Paige. (Notices the dress) Nice dress!!!" "Thank you." I head down to the set to see a beautiful archetitectural design. Wow, he is a genius.

After the video was made: I was so happy when the video was finally made. I enjoyed the dress but it was getting a little bit to hot. I head back down to the lair to see how Erik was doing. "Wonderful performance, Paige." I started to get all red in the face, and then he comes towards me, looking at me with those daring and beautiful eyes. Who could resist them? "Paige I have been thinking. I really did not want to do this but I think it is time to show you the reason why I do not belong out there." He took off his mask and revealed to me a face I have not seen before. " It is funny. You should be frightened of me." " Dear Erik, I am not afraid of your beautiful face. I do not care what is on the outside. (Points to his heart) It matters to me what is in here." I give him a hug and lay my head on the part of his chest that covers his heart. All of a sudden I start to cry for him. "Why does the world have to be so cruel to a man who does not hurt it but makes beautiful music for it?" We hug eachother for a long time. Erik kisses my forehead and tells me " No one knows."

After I was done shedding my tears, Erik tells me that he has another gift for me. He brings out a box beautifully handmade. I open the box and inside it started to play music. Also on the inside was this beautiful diamond ring. Next to the ring was another parchment letter and here is what it said:

I know that you are to young to get married or engaged but just remember this my angel, that I will always love you with all of my heart.

Love,

Erik

I give Erik another kiss and a hug. I sing the part of the "Dreaming of you" song and say "I love you,too"

And we give another long kiss.

The End.

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That was very beautiful Paige! Did you get my PM about putting these in the mop boy book? Please respond so that I can put yours in there if you want. ::D:

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yes i did. sorry it was not a response to your PM but i answered it. not to be rude. but here is another story you can put it in too.

I once was a mortal, living among them and their ways of life.

Now I am a vampire, bitten by one of the world's most feared predators.

Here is my story. Like I said I was once a mortal, hoping to find ways to make my life a better one then the life before.

Then one night, I met a strange but charming man who said that he was following me all night. He gave me the most daring and charming look I have ever seen. I approached him with caution and falling into his charm. As I approach him, he leans his head towards my neck and then all of a sudden I feel this terrible stinging pain. I push the man away and then I fall back into the depths of the abyss.

A few hours later I find myself at my home wondering "Why am I not dead?" I run into my bathroom to look and see two holes in my neck. I start to feel this really bad terrible pain come into my heart. Worse then heartburn I tell you.

Now: That is all I can remember from my trying and dreadful past. Now I hunt with the church in order to find this strange man. I now know his name. Dracula. The ruler of all vampires. Not to this one he is. I will find him and take back the life he took from me. Even if it means ending my own immortal life. Every night I go hunt for him even if I meet his own followers. Sometimes I have to give in to the vampire side of me in order to survive. But I will find him and take back what is mine.

The End.

If you feel that this story is to graphic or gives to much then I will understand Lish

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thank you ::D:

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Here is another one.

I was having an end of the year get-together with a bunch of my friends. We were having a typical party. Loud music, dancing, you know that kind of stuff. I was listening to one of the songs that was playing. I was looking for someone to dance with too.

I was just searching and searching and searching somemore til I could not take it anymore. I was about to cry my eyes out when from right behind me I hear this "Dew yew wan' tew dance, lassie?" I felt a jolt of shock all over my body for I recognized this voice. I turned around to see who it was. It was Gerry. I started to sweat for I could not get my answer out. :heat: Gerry was looking at me like come on give me an answer. So I said" Aye" I do not know how long I danced with him for all I know was that I had my head on his chest away in my own world not giving a care what was going on around me.

The only thing I knew was that my friends were laughing at me and I was like as if you would not do the same thing if you liked him. As soon as our get together was almost over Gerry asked me for my name and I said "Everyone calls me Paige" he gave me a kiss on the hand. So I really was sweating after that. :heat::heat: I started to really cry when he left after the party was over. I was like I hope to see you again, someday.

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Wow, Paige! These are very good!

Thank you so much for posting them. ::D:

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you are welcome Lish. (Paige gives Lish a hug)

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This is my Attila story.

I was practicing my archery. Every morning my Mother begs me to practice just incase if there is a raid in the village, then I could knock the raiders off of their horses. Everytime I practice I see the great king Attila just staring at me. Just staring at me!! I am not trying to impress him or anything. Alright I admit that I make bad aims at the target. I have not even made one.

Then I felt these gentle but rough hands on my arms. They were helping me aim at the target and I hit it. I turn around to see who it was. It was the great king. I quickly fall down into a low bow. He tells me "There is no need to bow before me." I look up at him and stand back on my feet. He asked me for my name and if I had just arrived with the other slaves he had just brought. I told him my name was Paige and that I have been here for sometime.

He took me into his home and showed me around. I was astonished to see what was inside for we huns are not allowed to enter the great king's home unless we are asked. Only his advisor and his wives are allowed to enter. He told me I could return to my home. I told my mother what happened and she was shocked. She told me that I might be made queen of the huns if he gives me the chance. It was my dream to atleast become queen then I could be out of the position of slavery.

The next day I went out to do my morning chores. I noticed myself starting to get sidetracked. I was watching Attila give archery lessons to his army. He and his men were all on horseback. I was thinking "you must have to be a very skilled archer in order to be that good." All of sudden he stopped his lesson and started to turn his head towards me. I quickly went back to my work and then I hear him call my name. "Paige!!" I turned around and said "Yes your majesty." He approached me on his horse and asked me if I would love to ride on his horse with him. I said him that I would love to.

He helped me on his horse. We had a great ride through the steppes. Never had I seen such beauty beyond our village. I felt like I was free. Free from slavery and free to see the world. Another reason I felt free was because of Attila's hot and sweaty body. :bonk: I felt like I was in heaven. We watched the sunset together and we rode home together as well. I asked him if it was ok if I stayed with him for one night for I do not like to wake my mother. My mother gets cranky when she is awakened. He allowed me to stay with him. Nothing happened I swear. But we did kiss eachother. That was the only thing that happened.

I returned home the next morning. I saw my mother just smiling at me for she thought something was up. I told her nothing happened.

The end.

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I loved your story Paige, that would be so great to bump into him like that. But if anyone would have the right words to say to him it would be you... You have a gift for words... I would sound like a blubbering Idiot... thanks for sharing it with us...Huggs...Peggy

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Woo hoo! Great job Paige!

By the way, I'm about to update the post... I"m extending the deadline to the end of June. That way there's no pressure on the GALS going to Vegas. ::D:

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thank you Lish you are awesome :claphands:

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I added another section to my Drac date it's in the thread for it!!

Only one more bit then I'm done My Tilly date is still in it's conception!!

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Great story Paige.

I watched Attila again yesterday and then had dreams about him last night. I'd stay longer but I have a delicious dream to continue. *runs back to bed*

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Thank you celadon2. Can you give me your dream once you are done?

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I swear I must be coocoo for loving to post stories. :bonk::bonk:.

Here is a funny one.

I was at a competition for Winterguard. Our theme for our show was music from "Spirit:Stallion of the Cimarron." I was getting all nervous and such because for the song "Homeland" I had to do a solo for the climatic part of the song. If you have seen the movie then you will know which part I am talking about. Anyways we do the song and I started really getting nervous. My solo came up. I did so good and the reason being I felt the presence of Gerry being in the building.

After the song the other guard members and I went back to the bathroom to get changed. I hear my coach talking to somebody. I recognized this someone's voice for it had said " Excuse me, is there a gal named Paige in there?" My coach said to the voice, "Just a moment. (Looks into the bathroom and calls to me)Paige are you dressed yet?" "Yes, ma'am." I come out of the bathroom and who should I see smiling at me and making my face turn dark red. Gerry Butler. I started getting all shaky but after awhile I started to calm myself down with a favorite song of mine from "Spirit:Stallion of the Cimarron." The song is "Here I Am" by Bryan Adams.

He tells me he likes my singing but I tell him that I do not have a good voice. He told me that I did a wonderful job out there and I asked him "You saw me?" and he said "Aye" . He asked me if I was nervous and I said that I was at first but then I thought of him. We went back into the stadium to hear what rating we got. We got a 1 in rating. If you do not understand what this means let me explain. 1 is better, 2 is good, 3 is ok, 4 is bad, and 5 is very bad. This is how I had to explain it to Gerry, knowing he has never been to any american competition shows. I taught him all the tosses, what they are called. We are not supposed to let anyone who does not know how to use the equipment could hurt themselves if not used properly. Lucky then all of you Gals would be mad at me for letting him hurt himself. Anyways this is the end of this story.

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